The look and asthetics i am trying to get i m not getting.

Hello guys,
I am trying to get the look and feel of animation like this

but i am getting this

. my animation quality looks bad. As others used flash or someother program.
Am i missing something like camera setting or brush setting. Pls help me i am gonna buy the toonboom . I am on trial right now.I need to know if its gonna work for me or not.

PS: i am not talking about animation . I am talking about line quality and look and feel.