My hopes and dreams

Last Call Productions…
This is my first year work.
I would like any and everyone to give me feed back.
The idea is a super hero team based on LAME stereo types from restaurant employees. If you have worked at a restaurant for a good length of time, or are drunk it should be funny. These are experiments and a 1st rough draft of our story. Two guys that work 50 hrs a week atleast, trying to make you laugh and hopefully one day do this for a living.

let me know what ya think.