Check out the commercial i made for BookRenters. I only had 3 days to make this ,so its not my best work:. I did make this with ToonBoom storyboard Pro and ToonBoom Animate Pro so let me know what you guys think…
http://zooppa.com/ads/bookrenters-dream-big-contest/videos/the-ultimate-dream
While the animation was okay, I didn’t think the ad worked.
I didn’t even really get what the point was to the end.
When you go for the big grand dreams, I am certainly not envious of him at all which is the idea I assume. I am not really sure the soundtrack helped in the message you were trying to convey either.
Please don’t take offense, that is just my opinion(which may be totally wrong :)).
lol its cool i only had 3 days to make it i wanted to see if i could animate 1 minute in 3 days thats all 
That might of been part of the problem, perhaps you felt the pressure to fill that full minute (i am guessing a rule for the comp!).
You certainly attempted to have a high number of unique scenes.