Dialogue piece

So I’m working on this piece in my spare time while I have Toon Boom Harmony, and wanted some opinions about it. It’s not finished, there are a few transitions I want to fix, but overall I like the way it’s going.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=y_UxRIV36JY
https://youtu.be/y_UxRIV36JY

This is my first time posting a video here, so I’m not sure which one will work. Anyway, let me know what you think.